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this is the translation in English (which sucks compared to the Dutch version)

The rain is dripping softly
falling on my skin
And I'm wondering
again,
why the sun isn't shining

A drop slips quickly
over my face
catches a hidden tear
which was only for myself

my naked feet step
in an shallow pool
the water reflects my illusion
and I'm wondering
whether it was me this whole time

And while the rain is falling on me,
nature is telling me
that she's also fed up about herself.

Suddenly the sun
starts shining again
and I'm running away
To catch up with myself again.

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:iconliesaa:
cool. misschien ga ik zoiets ook wel proberen met mijn gedichten ^_^

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:iconmaerko:
Deze vind ik heeeel mooi :) goed uitgedacht... sprakeloos
ubsuluut uun sterretje wuurd!

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Cooll :O Ik voeg m toe aan me fav :P
:iconmoonlitwhisper:
Cool. I thought the language looked familiar. I know a bit of german, and some of the words are similar, I think. But either way, I have a dutch book of fairy tales. It's really small, just a pocket book. Can't understand a word of it, but I love to just flip through it. I love different languages, even if I don't understand them. lol

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It's the calm before the storm
And I don't know
If I'll be here when the lightning flashes,
Gone before the thunder crashes.
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yeah dutch looks a bit like german for that matter. Most people only know a few lines in dutch:

mooie meisje, mooie coffeeshop - means: nice girl (prostitute) nice coffeeshop (where you buy weed which is sort of legal in the netherlands)

kijken kijken niet kopen - means: look at it, but don't buy it

Ik wil drugs - means: I want drugs

Ik houd van jou - means: I love you

:P at leats that kinda reactions do I get in other countries when I tell I'm dutch. but some people even ask when you say you come from the Netherlands, "Is that in Amsterdam?" but it's the other way around, amsterdam is the capitel of the Netherlands

I like other languages two, especially English I'm a great fan of English and I'm very good at the English subject at school too:P
Are you English? or what are you:P

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I actually have only heard the third to last phrase (or rather, understood it) because I'm in German class, and its close to "Ich will Drugs" which is german.
I think it's awesome that you're Dutch. This is why I love internet. I get to meet some awesome people like yourself. Lol. I laugh at people who don't know that Amsterdam is in the Netherlands, because everyone knows that the Netherlands is....oh crud. It's a country, right? Hoo-boy. Time for some coffee. I can't think right now. lmao. Anyhow, MOST people know that Amsterdam is a city or whatnot. *shrug* But that could just be my view point. :D
Yeah, I'm english. Or, rather, english speaking. If I was English, I'd have to live in England, and I live in the United States. Lol. The english language is a beautiful thing, when used right. I'm actually trying to write a book right now. :D :w00t:

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It's the calm before the storm
And I don't know
If I'll be here when the lightning flashes,
Gone before the thunder crashes.

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